The Discover

Kia Ora Everyone, This is my writing and its called " The Discover"

Excited, the family got out of the bus shivering because it was cold so they quickly put their jackets on. As they walked, they saw  something huge, they walked to it and saw a huge skeleton. They took pictures of it and searched what kind of skeleton it was. The family found out that it was a dinosaur skeleton. 

 

The climb

Kia Orana Everyone! this is my writing from our writhing skill group.

Exhausted, the man walked up the slope . The sun was so bright that it hit his eyes. After 56 minute he's half way from the top of the mountain. He looked at the sky and it reminded him of his son's favourite colour.